New Year!!!
5, 4, as everyone looking at there watches 3, 2, 1, All the campsites yell “Happy 2020 New Year” As my family yells back “Happy 2020 New Year to you too” Fireworks light of into the dark dusty dungeon sky, ZOOM, ZIP, BANG, POP Fireworks going off like a small circle rainbow. Everyone around a table drinking beer and wine and watching more and more fireworks. Lighting sparklers with my friends running around with them and shaking them. My eyes slowly drift off to sleep I was so tired I could have slept for days, Just before falling asleep shaking myself awake. Walking back to the big tent with my dad walking like a zombie. 3 hours after talking about random stuff with my dad I slowly drifting away to sleep on a chair. 
Its a cool poem but its a little glitch and you might need to fix it so yea you did good with the Hyperbole And Alliteration.
ReplyDeleteOk good its fixed :)
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